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Last November I wrote about being half way through writing a first draft <\/a>of a novel. It did get finished (triumph!) and now I am half way through revising it.<\/p>\n

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\nThis edit has already taken as long as the entire drafting process (in calendar days – I should have tracked working hours and didn’t) and the single word I would use to describe this process is humbling<\/em>.<\/p>\n

The focus for the first draft was to get it down, just get an entire draft done. Revising (with a patiently waiting small group of ‘first response readers’ standing by tapping their feet) is about all the usual editorial stuff, but the big thing has been to address all the bits that got tagged with “fix this later” or summarised as “something great happens here so they get to blah\u201d.<\/p>\n

Those were fine stopgaps at the time and the right thing to do to keep the draft moving, my challenge now in this first mammoth rewrite is to find fresh creative juice to solve the problems I made and then walked away from. Coincidentally nearly all of them are where the story took another turn away from the outline.<\/p>\n

Each step away from the outline made the final shape of the story and of the characters different to what I had planned. A better, more interesting, and authentically driven from the characters’ viewpoints story, but different enough that now I feel on my own and overwhelmed trying to patch it seamlessly into a readable experience.<\/p>\n

I’m loving the process, by the way, in case that sounded like a moan.<\/p>\n

I’m learning too (I can’t help but learn when the red pen tearing the draft apart is my own) which is delightful. This is my first time on a big job. Over the New Year break I took the opportunity to read and re-read a few tips from those who\u2019ve been down this path before me, and they all agreed on one thing \u201cstop procrastinating and get back to work\u201d.<\/p>\n

What is your number one tip for taming a first draft?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

Each step away from the outline made the final shape of the story and of the characters different to what I had planned.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[15,14],"tags":[25,105,24,74,3],"class_list":["post-130","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-nanowrimo","category-writing-2","tag-editing","tag-happy","tag-revising","tag-worry","tag-writing"],"yoast_head":"\nRevising a first draft for the first time - 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